My Journey as a ... Writer
 
The choice of words in this piece actually had my heart beating faster and breath more shallow.  I felt frightened for the victims of this guy's shameful betrayal.  He was making money off of the backs of these hard workers.  I loved our heroine's bravery in standing up to this guy.  The descripitive words and the mixed in spanish made the imagary very clear to me.  Both this and Corner are written almost in a form of poetry.  They both also portay the mistreatment of Mexicans